Entry #3 ~ Are Vaccines good?
https://directorsblog.nih.gov/2022/10/18/study-shows-benefits-of-covid-19-vaccines-and-boosters/
Ever since the pandemic hit in 2020 the government has been requiring the vaccine. This article is biased with saying that the vaccine is the only thing that will keep one safe from the virus. when that is not the case to every person who gets the vaccine.
The reason why this article is biased is because people in my life that got the vaccine have stilled gotten covid. The article also says to get the vaccine to protect your health and loved ones health but from personal experiencing once people got the vaccine their body couldn't take it and they got really sick for a couple of days after they got the vaccine. it seemed they were in better health before they got the vaccine rather than after they got it. People were so sick they hardly got out of bed because every part of their body was hurting.
Vaccines aren't good or bad. they are just point less and shouldn't be required by the government. Although they might do some people good, they can do also do people bad. The vaccine was never going to prevent someone from getting the virus, so there was no point in getting it.
Your four new entries look good, Cesar. Your writing flows well, you are somewhat developing your content, and you are working the concepts of rhetoric to connect to your audience and keep them engaged. You have some interesting topics for your audience to connect to. Good visual appeal with images and layout. You do have room to develop and discuss further, as most of your entries are too brief. Nice work. Keep it up!
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